Ebony improving our writing – using ISPACE

We are part way through our writing unit – which is based on writing a biography about a famous internet personality.

One of our sessions focused on using ISPACE openers. ISPACE openers are a way to start a sentence to make it more interesting.

If you would like to learn more about ISPACE openers – follow this link:

https://slideplayer.com/slide/14628222/

We started with a simple sentence, then added an ISPACE opener, then added some higher level punctuation and finally improved by adding some more complex vocabulary.

James Charles Dickinson has 14.2 million subscribers.

Currently, James Charles Dickinson has 14.2 million subscribers.

Currently, James Charles Dickinson has 14.2 million subscribers: his makeup is so popular.

Currently, James Charles Dickinson has approximately 14.2 million subscribers: his makeup is so popular.

Why do we use ISPACE and improve our sentences?

We do this to engage the reader to make them interested in what we are writing. This makes them want to continue reading.

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