Year 5 Monkey Puzzle – The Property Ladder!

As part of year 5’s new literacy block, the children have been asked to promote a house to a famous family.  For research purposes, they got to explore different properties on the market and their descriptions today.  They found properties that they wanted to buy and loved as some of them had home cinemas, swimming pools and tennis courts!

What they did really notice though, whilst being feature detectives, was the constant positive undertone, the formal language alongside rich descriptive language.

What language would you use to promote and sell a property?