Year 6 – Drafting our introduction.

In Year 6 we are getting ready to write our non-chronological report about an animal from the polar regions.

Today, we have been creating a first draft of the introduction.

Ebony class had a go at creating an introduction for a non-chronological report about children:

Children in Ebony class (some of the best children in the world) are beautiful. According to their teachers, 80% of children in Hazeldown Primary School look up to Year 6 – who are at the top of the school. They range from 10-11 years old so they are working towards being responsible members of society.

In this paragraph we used facts and figures, brackets for parenthesis, dashes, relative clauses, generalising vocabulary and much more.

 

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